Assesment of Graph

For the assesment I performed Grpah to Andy and Maria. I found this to give me more confidence in a performance I was not too content with. Still some of the imagery needs to be stronger and my writing style needs to be cleaner and more graffitiesque.
I also saw new layers in that the gallery goers seem to be behind a cage in the end. Similar to the cages of our own homes. Maria suggested not to knock on the door which I accept but I waas aware that when done infront of an audience this got a good laugh and so I must question this. Audience enjoyment and intreeging involvement or artistic integrity?